Lesson Learned

I learned a very important lesson, just the other day! It was important cause i know it was. The reason why it is important is cause, you try hard everyday. If you are not going full speed you are last, or if your not first you are last. So I learned if you don't try hard you will not get good results.

Comma What?!

My father had left our house in the midst of a fight between Lindsey and my mother. My mother was trying to get Lindsey to go with her to the Y to swim. Without thinking, Lindsey had blared, "I'd rather die!" at the top of her lungs. My father watched as my mother froze, then burst fleeing to their bedroom, to wail behind the door. He quietly tucked his notebook in his jacket pocket, took the car keys off the hook by the back door, and snuck out.

Literary Elements

1.Satire-a literary work in which vices, follies, etc. are held up to ridicule and contempt.

2.Irony-expression in which the intended meaning of the words is the direct opposite of their usual sense



3.Analogy-similarity in some ways

4.Foreshadowing-to indicate or suggest beforehand; prefigure.